SUMMER
I could feel the sun as it warmed my skin,
giving it a more cherry red color.
The waves crashed onto the shore in the distance.
The birds sang and soared through the sky
giving me a relieved and satisfied feeling,
one of the chairs on the porch was still rocking back and forth from the light breeze.
I Relaxed in the sun while
Kids played in the waves and made sandcastles
Giving me the memories from the many years before
It was a nice feeling ,a satisfied feeling
Giving me the uttermost feeling of Summer.
I could feel the sun as it warmed my skin,
giving it a more cherry red color.
The waves crashed onto the shore in the distance.
The birds sang and soared through the sky
giving me a relieved and satisfied feeling,
one of the chairs on the porch was still rocking back and forth from the light breeze.
I Relaxed in the sun while
Kids played in the waves and made sandcastles
Giving me the memories from the many years before
It was a nice feeling ,a satisfied feeling
Giving me the uttermost feeling of Summer.
I think this poem is really well written and has great imagery of Summer. I really like it, Good job!! :)
ReplyDeleteI love this! I like how it is really clearly written, with lots of alliteration. I like the imagery! WELL DONE!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is how I picture my summer too!
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